I liked this. Moreso...I liked the way it ended. Endings are hard. Some people think that actually beginning is the hardest part, but it's really ending.
I think that you even captured the 'not knowing what was going to happen next' tense feeling of the war, by the cliff hanger-y ending.
dun dun dun would not have been very out of place right after the last few words from Harry. ;) At least I heard them in my head when I finished reading.
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Date: 2006-05-20 11:41 pm (UTC)From:I liked this. Moreso...I liked the way it ended. Endings are hard. Some people think that actually beginning is the hardest part, but it's really ending.
I think that you even captured the 'not knowing what was going to happen next' tense feeling of the war, by the cliff hanger-y ending.
dun dun dun would not have been very out of place right after the last few words from Harry. ;) At least I heard them in my head when I finished reading.